Inventing Characters
First, we hear
characters:
Some of my early childhood memories involved piglets, and toes. Remember, ‘This little piggy went to market and this little piggy stayed
home? This little piggy had roast beef and this little piggy had none? Finally,
this little piggy cried wee, wee, wee all the way home.”
Then there were the three pigs who lived in a straw house,
that was blown down by the huffing and puffing wolf. I loved that story but
can’t remember if they even had names. I always thought it was a Grimm fairy
tale, but after searching for the author’s name, there appears to be a dispute.
Seems understandable, since it is a story that has survived the oral tradition
of the ages. Who wrote it down first?
Shy at first, this one approached me a minute later. |
Second, we see
characters in movies and on television:
There was Porky Pig. He hung out with Bugs Bunny in the
cartoons. So cute.
How about the clever pig, Babe? He corralled the sheep
better than the dogs.
Third, we read
about characters:
Trying to tell me something at the local dairy. |
Wilbur is a ‘Terrific Pig” according to Charlotte, in E.B.
White’s Charlotte’s Web.
Are you a fan of the more recent Peppa the Pig?
How about Piglet?
Remember the intelligent Squealer from George Orwell’s
Animal Farm who becomes the supervisor on the farm? After all, “All Animals Are
Equal / But Some Are More Equal Than Others."
I'm not sure if this mama is pregnant or out of shape. |
Last, we create our
own characters:
As writers, we can make characters do, or say, anything we
want them to do or say. It is a power unlike any other. First, we make up their
personality. We usually start with the hero, which is the main character, also
called a protagonist. Then, we create supporting characters and minor
characters. We also create an antagonist, or the bad guy. Usually, the
antagonist makes the protagonist look good.
When creating characters, we might ask ourselves some of
these questions:
Are they cuter than newborn pigs?
How do they look? Are they ugly on the inside and the
outside?
Are they mysterious
and if so, what made them that way?
Is there some sort of
psychological problem that’s going to bubble to the surface? Are they annoying?
Do they have unusual peccadilloes or bizarre fetishes?
Are they sweet,
gentle and impressionable?
Should we get rid of them half way through the book? How should
we get rid of them?
Will they be slaughtered? Will they leave a legacy?
Do they have character flaws?
What are the obstacles they must face? Will they triumph when faced with adversity?
What are the obstacles they must face? Will they triumph when faced with adversity?
How do we name them? Someone once suggested phone books, but no one uses those anymore. I prefer making names up as I go along, and the baby naming sites on the internet.
(Here's a tip I've never used, but want to someday: At the end of foreign made films, the credits go on and on with fascinating names. Combining the first name from one, with the last name of another, could make a great character name.)
(Here's a tip I've never used, but want to someday: At the end of foreign made films, the credits go on and on with fascinating names. Combining the first name from one, with the last name of another, could make a great character name.)
Acting?
It’s a lot of fun, and best if you can pretend to be each
character as you write. Wear a cowboy hat while writing a Western, or something sexy while working on your romance novel. Maybe oink a
little when writing anthropomorphic farm scenes. You think I’m kidding,
but reading your dialogue out loud makes it sound realistic. And if you’ve ever
acted in local theater, or in high school plays, your method acting can come in
handy. Whether it’s a children’s book or science fiction, your characters need to
have emotions to keep readers
interested.
Let’s Meet!
This upcoming Saturday morning, 9:30-11:30, this little
piggy, meaning me, will be part of a panel discussion at the Hemet Library,
which of course is located in Hemet, California. Here's a link. We’ll be discussing tips on crafting
compelling characters. I hope to see you
there.
Have any tips for creating great characters?
Have any tips for creating great characters?
Good writing tips! One of the things I tend to look at are word origins, particularly if they go back to old English or old German. The root word can make a good surname.
ReplyDeleteI love stories with animals. I fell in love with Charlotte's Web the first time I read it, and I read it over and over. That book was full of great characters!
ReplyDeleteI read a lot of the James Herriot books and then read them to the children. Even though they could have read then on their own.
ReplyDeleteNice writing advice.
cheers, parsnip